I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora David. I am glad to see that you have tried to post something to your blog. I will have a look at some of your work in your folders and can add some on for you. When we get back to school, we will make sure you are confident with blog posting.
Hi David, good effort buddy. It would be cool to see you fill in your blog, a bit more. As you learn something you could post and share, giving us this gift of your journey with your blog.My positive is the bright and bold graphic you used.Remember to have -a Title -an introduction and hopefully a considered comment or conclusion. Images are also a good way to brighten and inform in a pleasing manner.Stay awesome and be kind.
Hello David I see you have made someone for your blog But did not go as planned But I don't understand the Image on the slide but Maybe you could tell me about it and add a title and a bit about it So maybe I can understand it. -Orlando
Kia ora David.
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see that you have tried to post something to your blog. I will have a look at some of your work in your folders and can add some on for you. When we get back to school, we will make sure you are confident with blog posting.
Hi David, good effort buddy. It would be cool to see you fill in your blog, a bit more. As you learn something you could post and share, giving us this gift of your journey with your blog.My positive is the bright and bold graphic you used.Remember to have -a Title -an introduction and hopefully a considered comment or conclusion. Images are also a good way to brighten and inform in a pleasing manner.Stay awesome and be kind.
ReplyDeleteHello David I see you have made someone for your blog But did not go as planned But I don't understand the Image on the slide but Maybe you could tell me about it and add a title and a bit about it So maybe I can understand it. -Orlando
ReplyDeletehello David,
ReplyDeleteI really like it! Maybe resize it to medium?
hi david. i really like your blog. maybe you could do more detail on your blog
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